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Building an argument

Information, resources, and tools to help you build strong arguments

Who is your audience?

It is important to consider your audience any time you are making an argument. In academic writing, it's your job as the writer to tell the story of your argument: explain your position, and help your reader understand your critical thinking by telling them about the evidence and why it supports your claim. You may decide to shape your argument differently depending on your audience, perhaps emphasizing specific points or highlighting evidence that you think a particular audience will find convincing. For example, you might describe your research differently when you're talking with your family that you would in in your graduate thesis, or in a blog post for a public audience, even though you are arguing the same position. When you're writing for a North American academic audience, it can be a good idea to imagine your audience as an interested, curious person who may not share your opinion or your specialized knowledge, but is open to discussing it with you. How can you tell your story so that your argument engages your audience? 

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Audience awareness

Understanding an audience’s needs and expectations is essential to creating effective communication. Crafting a message involves more than producing words; the message must also be presented appropriately. For example, writing a project proposal in limerick form might provide excellent information, but it’s unlikely the proposal would meet the expectations of the decision makers.

When deciding how to approach writing for a specific audience, authors need to consider many aspects of developing the message. For example, how much information does the audience already possess on the topic? An author may not need to provide detailed explanations to an expert, but explanations are necessary when the intention is to explain the author’s thinking or when the audience’s familiarity with the subject matter isn’t guaranteed. The formality of the structure, tone, and style also needs to align with the audience’s expectations. Finally, authors must determine whether a strictly objective perspective is necessary or if they can include some personal observations and emotion in the description.

How Does the Message Change for Different Audiences?

Consider how you would describe a personal experience to the following audiences and how the content, structure, tone, style, and explanations would change for each audience:

You (e.g., diary entry)

  • Focused on personal details with little explanation; may be more focused on describing the event and resulting emotions
  • Informal structure, tone, and style

Close friend who shared the experience (e.g., a personal email or text)

  • Likely focused on personal details, such as the reaction to the event or resulting emotions, versus describing the event
  • Informal structure, tone, and style

Work acquaintance who wasn’t present for the event (e.g., work email)

  • Includes sufficient detail to explain what happened; may be more objective versus emotional
  • Semi-formal structure, tone, and style

Supervising manager (e.g., event report)

  • Provides sufficient, objective description to provide background details, describe the event, explain the outcome(s), and may include rationale for why the event happened
  • Formal structure, tone, and style, especially if the message is likely to be forwarded to senior managers

Senior executive (e.g., briefing note)

  • Provides necessary details to inform the individual on the event, including background details, a precise description of the event, rationale for why the event happened, options for follow-up, and recommendations for future similar events
  • Focuses on an objective presentation of only the essential details
  • Formal structure, tone, and style

Academic audiences

If you're writing for an academic audience, your approach will need to meet the expectations of the target audience. For example, a post in a team Moodle discussion forum could be informal and personal if the audience is other students. However, if an instructor asked students to model formal academic writing in posts to him or her, the writing would instead have a formal structure, tone, and style, as well as clear explanations that demonstrate the author’s understanding of the topic. An informal reflective piece, such as a journal entry, might be written with the instructor as the intended direct audience, therefore the work could be more personal and without explanations of course concepts with which the instructor is familiar. In contrast, a thesis would be written for a direct audience of the thesis committee and an implied audience of the general academic and/or professional community. Accordingly, the document would have a formal structure, tone, and style and should present all the information necessary to understand the author’s research and discussion.

If you’re a student and you’re unsure of what approach you should take in a work, please consult your instructor. For more information and suggestions on tailoring a message to an academic audience, please visit Audience by the Writing Center at the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill.

Balancing content with audience expectations

DecorativeThere’s another aspect of audience awareness that also comes under consideration, whether it’s for a written work, presentation, or any other kind of communication, and that’s balancing the content the communicator wants to provide with the expectations of the audience.

For example, when a presenter is creating the framework for an oral presentation, the presenter has to consider more than just the content he or she wants to share with the audience. The presenter is going to enter that room with a desire to share information, but the audience will also attend with an expectation of what information they’ll receive. The presenter’s job is to anticipate the audience’s expectations so that the content both satisfies the presenter’s desire to share as well as the audience’s points of interest. If the presenter weighs the communication too heavily with content but doesn't address the audience's expectations, the presentation will be off balance.

The importance of accommodating both the author’s and the audience’s needs is also present in writing. For student authors, this balance can be tricky because they can be tempted to use writing to demonstrate a breadth of reading. That is, to treat an essay as an opportunity to insert as many details as possible in every nook and cranny of the writing to show that the author has read extensively. There may be instances where such an approach is appropriate, such as when writing a literature review; however, in a typical essay, students run the risk of ignoring their instructor’s expectations for the work. Typically, instructors assume that students have done the assigned reading(s), and the essay isn’t merely a demonstration of how broadly the student has read. Rather, an essay is an opportunity for a student to put the information to use in a way that demonstrates the student’s understanding of the topic. In other words, an essay isn’t just an information dump; instead, instructors are looking for students to use the information to show they understand the materials, they can choose the most appropriate information to support the analysis of their topic, and they can structure the information appropriately to create a convincing argument.

There are lots of other applications for this approach to managing content and expectations e.g., meetings or job interviews. The key thing to remember is that communication isn’t only about pushing out information; effective communication also involves anticipating and meeting the expectations of the intended audience.